Saturday, 16 November 2013

Grammar police.

I simply could not let that last email go without commenting on the shockingly bad composition, grammar etc.  Let's see if Mr Nelson gets his secretary Pierre to correct it! I also question his insistence on using Western Union or Money Gram for payment of the fees. Let's see what he has to say about that.




Dear Sir


Many thanks for your speedy response. It is imperative for Miss Edgard's safety that we attend to this matter as soon as possible. Every day spent in such conditions eats away at her soul. I do however have a few concerns.

She assures me that the Holy Reverend at the refugee camp in which she is currently residing, recommended you as a lawyer because you are trustworthy and professional. Having just read your reply, I really do think you need to be having words with your secretary, Pierre Albert. The reply he sent was terrible. The grammar and punctuation (or lack of it) was shockingly bad. Did he not go to school? One would assume that to be a legal secretary would require a degree of intelligence and education. A reply of such shockingly bad quality does not exactly inspire confidence in your abilities as a law practice. Therefore I really must insist that your last email is rewritten using the correct grammar, punctuation and capital letters. Only then will I feel able to trust you in this matter. To help you along in this matter I have highlighted some of your secretary's errors in the original email below. Please make sure Pierre attends to this immediately.

I would also wish to know why payment of the fees has to be paid by Western Union Money Transfer? As a business owner, I shall be paying via my company account and require this to be paid directly into your firms bank account. Therefore I require your full bank details, account number, sort code, IBAN number and BIC Code plus full branch address and phone number. As soon as I have these details and the grammatically correct reply I have asked for, I see no reason to delay this matter any further .

I await your response on this matter.

Yours sincerely

Mr Hugh Jorgan




And below is the corrected email!




From: drgabrielnelson@hotmail.com
To: hughjorgan68@outlook.com
Subject: OFFICIAL COST OF THE DOCUMENTS FROM THE FEDERAL HIGH COURT.
Date: Wed, 13 Nov 2013 12:03:13 +0000

NELSON LAW CHAMBERS
ESQ
Our Ref: Dcc/Vol.18 CaseNo.16-2-13/11/2013
Your Ref: Power of Attorney / Affidavit of oath
Mobil Phone:  +221-778 022 077      

Email : (barnelsonlawchambers@gmail.com) or (nelsonlawchambers@hotmail.com)  
Address :  Sicap Liberte 6 villa 368 3rd floor Dakar Senegal.

                  

          
Attention.

Mr. Hugh Jorgan,


Thank you for accepting to use my noble law firm in this transaction.

Meanwhile Mr.
Jorgan, i wish to notify you on the note of my assessment from the federal high court here, i was meant to understand that, these documents will officially cost the sum of one thousand two hundred and fifty dollars ($1.250)  to procure all the paper and make them valid for this transfer, below here is how it accumulate to that amount.

The power of attorney cost................................$ 550


Making a sworn affidavit of oath in your name cost .......$ 400


High court notary stamp cost...............$ 50


Legalization of document ..............................$ 250


Total.......................................... $ 1.250

 

And you are to send this money through
western union money transfer or through Money Gram so that i can pay the registrar in the federal high court and procure the papers,
below here is my secretary information you will use and send the money and attached here is my identity card, (This makes no sense at all)

Name of receiver ..............  PIERRE ALBERT.


Address................ SICAP LIBERTE 6 VILLA 368 3rd FLOOR


Country........   DAKAR SENEGAL.


upon the receipt of the said amount, i will commence the process of the legal documents immediately, which will be ready in our working two day, (again, makes no sense)

once more thank you for choosing to work with my law chambers as i assure you the best of my legal services.
please do not fail to contact me back if you need any more clarification,
my priority attention is to render the best of my services to all my clients.

                            yours sincere in services.

                 DR.BAR .GABRIEL NELSON (ESQ).




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JUSTICE FOR ALL. DR. BAR. GABRIEL NELSON

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